헤이든 아발론 녹지원B Writing Class

Hi everyone (안녕하세요!).  It was nice to meet you all today.  반가왔어요.  This week’s homework is you need to write an Independent essay, where you give your opinion about a question.  This week’s question is:  “Girls are better at boys in learning English.  Do you agree or disagree?” 

You need to write 150-200 words and the flow of your writing should have:

 

* Main idea (thesis) with a hook – This is your introduction, where you state what you think and why. You should spend 5 minutes on this. 

* 2-3 supporting arguments, with supporting evidence and personal examples.  You should spend 9 minutes on this. 

* Conclusion – here you re-state your introduction, but using different words and possibly different grammar.  You should spent 5 minutes on this. 

 

Edit and correct your essay.  You should spend 1 minute on this.  Please email me your answer during the week to my email address, haydnenglish@yahoo.com

Thanks guys!  수고했어!